Dear James,
Thanks so much for chance to review your gripping story. I was fascinated and moved by many aspects of it, but in the end, I felt the writing fell a little short of illuminating this important story. This is a very subjective view, so I encourage you to continue writing and submitting to other representatives. Keep at it—you will get
there.
Warm Regards…
Guess that means I better write the last 25 000 words, go back to the beginning, and start polishing...
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